G类考生该不应该遵循父母提议修改前后作文相比较,万能思路7

原标题:G类考生该不该听从父母建议批改前后作文对比

在剑桥雅思中,利弊探讨题的考官范文一共给了六篇,如下:

2017-04-01  常远托福

Some people thing that children should
always follow what their parents tell them to do, but others believe
that children should learn to think for themselves.

剑4 Test B

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Discuss both views and give your
opinion.

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home
and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it
is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

万能思路

**In contemporary setting, children in some
countries definitely obey the order from their parents, however,
children from other countries tend to have their independent
thinking.This essay will argue that thinking by children
themselves is not the best answer and following their parents’ directive
is a more suitable option.Considering the issue, it is crucial to explore
it from two sides.

What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young
age?

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On the one hand, there is no doubt
thatparents’ commandfollowing
parents’ instructionis much more beneficial for their children’s
life, especially good for their future programming. To be more
specific,directiveinstructionsfrom
parents could be more helpful for their childrenforming
correct view on life and sense of value.to avoid
making unnecessary errors due to lack of experience. Young children are
always too young to distinguish right from wrong because they could
easily imitate their peers’ behaviour because of curiosity. Therefore,
parents’ advice and participation could timely correct their
inappropriate behaviour. A typical example is that parents participation
in children’s recreation activity could help them avoid addiction to
these activities. So their physical and emotional wellbeing can be
guaranteed. For instance, Mencius who was an ancient
Chinese political theorist, initially he was sick of studying, but he
was given a lesson by his mother one time and understood the meaning of
studying, becoming a great educator eventually.不能拿身边人举例。

剑5 Test 2

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On the other hand, despite the fact that learning how to think
would stimulate children’s potential, it has the possibility of erring
from the right path. In another word, it could be possible that children
learning incorrect things which they could not differentiate from the
both. For example, more than half prisoners are Maori youths in New
Zealand because of the neglect and indulgence from their parents, and
there are few Maori children, like the Maori kit Julian Dennison who is
the main actor of Dead Pool 2, become successful on their own
development.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for
year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

锻炼独立的性格,可以带来以下两种好处。

这一段要写孩子形成独立思考能力的重要性。独立思考才能形成critical辩证思考的能力,思考让孩子学会整理寻找信息,寻找朋友,这些能力对他们的成长极为重要。他们自身的体验会给他们留下更深刻的印象。

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide
to do this.

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按照这个思路往下写。

剑9 Test 1

**develop time management ability时间管理**

In conclusion, although enabling children
to develop the ability of independent thinking can influence them
becoming successful to a certain extent, it is only through parents’
command that the real benefits can be realised.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning
a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

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In contemporary setting, children in some
countries definitely obey the order from their parents, however,
children from other countries tend to have their independent thinking.
This essay agree that thinking by
children themselves is not the best answer and following their parents’
instruction is a more suitable option.Considering the issue, it is crucial to explore
it from two sides.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

-study or work alone can improve work efficiency by developing strong
time management ability

On the one hand, there is no doubt that
following parents’ instruction is much more beneficial for their
children’s life, especially good for their future programming. To be
more specific, instructions from parents could be more helpful for their
children to avoid making unnecessary errors due to lack of experience.
Young children are always too young to distinguish right from wrong
because they could easily imitate their peers’ behaviour because of
curiosity. Therefore, parents’ advice and participation could timely
correct their inappropriate behaviour. A typical example is that
parents’ participation in children’s recreation activity could help them
avoid addiction to these activities. So their physical and emotional
wellbeing can be guaranteed.

剑10 Test 3

独立工作可以培养时间管理能力,让工作更有效率

On the other hand, it is also important
that cultivating their independent thinking ability. Due to the fact
that forming the independent mind can help children to acquire some
useful skills in the future, such
asfor example, children begin to think
independently about how to search
information and make friends. Thesekind of skills are extremely important for their
growing.growth.
A recent statistic from Sydney
revealed that children who have independent thinking skill have 17 percent aremore
likely to make friends and get information than others. Because they could think logically what they
should learn from peers and what errors should be avoided. They learn to
develop their thinking capacity also through developing relationship
with others. However, it could be
alittle risky that children would become too
much independent, which leading to some problem, such as self-centeredness, even selfish.

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able
to buy the same products anywhere in the world.

-once avoid the interruptions from others, you can concentrate better
当没有别人打扰的时候可以更专注

In conclusion, although enabling children
to develop the ability of independent thinking can influence them
becoming successful to a certain extent, it is only through parents’ command that the
real benefits can be realised.parents’participation and instructions are necessary.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

-save time and get your works done quickly

6.5 就这么写 改了好多了

剑10 TestB

节省时间,很快完成任务

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

-use the time saved to compete more tasks and become productive

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What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a
large number of toys.

省下来的时间可以做更多的事情

责任编辑:

**boost confidence加强自信心**

具体范文:

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剑4 Test B

-completing tasks on your own help boost your confidence and self belief
独立完成人物可以加强自信心

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

-You believe everything is under your control and feel a sense of
accomplishment 一切尽在你的掌控,很有成就感

Write about the following topic:

-Then, your confidence makes you rely more on yourself, use your own
judgment, make your own decision and thus become mature and independent

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home
and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it
is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

更加依靠自己,自己判断、决定,变得成熟独立

What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young
age?

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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.

套用各种题目

Write at least 250 words.

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范文

TPO3 – Task2

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of
six or seven. However, because it is more likely now that both parents
work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home
up to that age. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when
they are much younger.

Some students prefer to work on class assignments by themselves.
Others believe it is better to work in a group. Which do you
prefer?学生应该自己学习还是在小组里面学习?

While some people think this may be damaging to a child’s development,
or to a child’s relationship with his or her parents, in fact there are
many advantages to having school experience at a young age.

思路:自己学习好,这样可以锻炼独立的性格,由此可带来两个好处;1.
锻炼时间管理能力 2.加强自信心

Firstly, a child will learn to interact with a lot of different people
and some children learn to communicate very early because of this. They
are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at
home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new
situations. Such children find their first day at school at the age of
six very frightening and this may have a negative effect on how they
learn.

Personally speaking, I believe students should work on their assignments
alone. And I have two reasons.

Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children
develop faster socially. They make friends and learn how to get on with
other children of a similar age. This is often not possible at home
because they are the only child, or because their brothers or sisters
are older or younger.

First, study or work alone can improve work efficiency by developing
strong time management ability. Once you can avoid the interruptions
from people of group studies, you are able to concentrate better on your
own work and save time from answering others’ problems. So you are able
to save a lot of precious time and make your own schedule to get your
works done quickly.

So overall, I believe that, attending school from a young age is good
for most children. They still spend plenty of time at home with their
parents, so they can benefit from both environments.

Also, completing tasks on your own within a time you planned can help
boost your confidence and self belief. You believe everything is under
your control and feel a sense of accomplishment on being able to fulfill
more things. Then, your confidence makes you rely more on yourself, use
your own judgment, make your own decision and thus become mature and
independent.

259 words

TPO 25 -Task1

剑5 Test 2

Students often want to get better grades in their classes. Explain
what students should do in order to improve their performance in a
class.学生应该如何提高自己的学习成绩?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

思路:建议各位将题目有意识地向万能理由靠拢,即培养独立的学习能力和建立自信心有助于提高成绩。

Write about the following topic:

I think students should learn to be independent and solve problems on
their own in order to improve their grades.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for
year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

First, study or work alone can improve work efficiency by developing
strong time management ability. Once you can avoid the interruptions
from people of group studies, you are able to concentrate better on your
own work. So you can save a lot of time, and the time saved can be used
to complete more tasks and you will become productive and learn more.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide
to do this.

Also, completing tasks on your own within a time you planned can help
boost your confidence and self belief. You believe everything is under
your control and feel a sense of accomplish ment on being able to
fulfill more things.  And your confidence can reinforce your determine
to achieve great academic performance.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.

TPO 25 -Task2

Write at least 250 words.

Some people do not enjoy shopping and shop only when they have a
specific purchase to make. Others like to go shopping for pleasure
whether or not they have something to buy. Which do you prefer and
why?有人喜欢有目的的购物,而有些人逛商场只是为了消遣,不一定买什么,你喜欢哪种?

范文

思路:上述万能理由的主旨思想是“高效”,而有目的的购物比漫无目的的逛街节省时间。
请参考下面答案。

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have
a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is
not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is
also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become
economically independent for a period of time.

Personally speaking, I prefer to shop only when I need to buy specific
things, because I want to be self-organized and efficient when doing
everything.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young
adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted
in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast,
those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other
places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to
draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important
factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an
advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

First, going shopping for a specific reason can save time from wondering
around or window shopping.I don’t want to waste my time on shopping, but
to use it in my favorite ways like hanging out with friends, doing
exercises in the gym or reading. As a student, being able to manage my
time is a good quality and can make me become productive and learn more.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that
important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies
or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may
think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do
something completely different from a university course. But overall, I
think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are
essential for getting a reasonable career.

Also, shopping for specific things makes me feel happy, because I’ve
made a better use of my time.I hope this time management ability can
also influence people around me and even make them to be self-organized
and efficient.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their
horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of
what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such
a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and
taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

TPO 27 -Task2

291 words

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

剑9 Test 1

Parents should be in the process of helping their children to choose a
university.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Use specific reasons and details in your response.

Write about the following topic:

家长是否应该帮助孩子选择大学?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning
a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

思路:小孩子应该学会自立,不依赖家长。

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Personally speaking, I think parents should not help their children to
choose university. And children should learn to be independent.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.

Learning to be independent is important, because it helps build up
children’s confidence.Once children could learn to complete things on
their own, they start to believe everything is under their control and
feel a sense of accomplishment on being to fulfill more things. Then
their confidence makes them rely more on themselves, use your own
judgment, make your own decision and thus become mature.

Write at least 250 words.

Also, being independent and confident gives them honor and respect from
other people, which can further benefit their relationship with others
as well as their career in the future.

范文

TPO 30 -Task2

Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at
secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some
educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational
authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative
outcomes.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

The obvious argument in its favour is that young children pick up
languages much more easily than teenagers. Their brains are still
programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilitates learning
another language, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by
self-consciousness.

Parents should be involved in the process of helping their children to
choose a career.

The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more
frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach, thus
maintaining learners’ enthusiasm and progress. Their command of the
language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while
learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them. They may
also gain a better understanding of other cultures.

Use specific reasons and details in your response.

There are, however, some disadvantages. Primary school teachers are
generalists. and may not have the necessary language skills themselves.
If specialists have to be brought in to deliver these sessions, the
flexibility referred to above is diminished. If primary language
teaching is not standardised, secondary schools could be faced with a
great variety of levels in different languages within their intake,
resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains.
There is no advantage if enthusiastic primary pupils become demotivated
as soon as they change schools. However, these issues can be addressed
strategically within the policy adopted.

家长是否应该帮助孩子选择职业?

Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally
and economically, and early exposure to language learning contributes to
this. Young children’s innate abilities should be harnessed to make
these benefits more achievable.

思路:小孩子应该学会自立,不依赖家长。

267 words

Personally speaking, I think parents should not help their children to
choose career. And children should learn to be independent.

剑10 Test 3

Learning to be independent is important, because it helps build up
children’s confidence.Once children could learn to complete things on
their own, they start to believe everything is under their control and
feel a sense of accomplishment on being to fulfill more things. Then
their confidence makes them rely more on themselves, use your own
judgment, make your own decision and thus become mature.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Also, being independent and confident gives them honor and respect from
other people, which can further benefit their relationship with others
as well as their career in the future.

Write about the following topic:

TPO 28 -Task1

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able
to buy the same products anywhere in the world.

Students have to complete various types of academic assignments in
school. Choose one of the assignments below and explain why you think it
is beneficial for students: research paper/Class presentation/Group
project.从下面任选一种你认为有益于学生的作业:写作文、做演讲、完成小组作业。

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

思路:选择论文,因为需要独立完成,且比演讲有难度,从而锻炼独立完成一项任务的能力。

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.

Personally speaking, doing research paper is beneficial for students,
because it helps students develop time management skill and also boost
their confidence.

Write at least 250 words.

First, doing research paper requires students to work alone and make
their own schedule to get their works done on time. This experience can
develop students’ strong time management skill which helps them to be
self organized and raises their awareness of be efficient in order to be
productive and learn more.

范文

Also, completing a research paper on their own can boost their
confidence to finish more research topics in the future. Then, their
confidence makes them rely more on themselves and use their intelligence
to do well on the papers. The confidence of doing research paper alone
will benefit their study or work in the future.

It is said that countries are becoming similar to each other because of
the global spread of the same products, which are now available for
purchase almost anywhere. I strongly believe that this modern
development is largely detrimental to culture and traditions worldwide.

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A country’s history, language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in
its manufactured artefacts. If the relentless advance of international
brands into every corner of the world continues, these bland packages
might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation, which
would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world, as well as the
sad disappearance of the manifestations of a place`s character. What
would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot,
or a Fijian kava ritual without its bowl made from a certain type of
tree bark?

2006-2013历年口语真题

Let us not forget either that traditional products, whether these be
medicines, cosmetics, toys, clothes, utensils or food, provide
employment for local people. The spread of multinational products can
often bring in its wake a loss of jobs. as people turn to buying the new
brand, perhaps thinking it more glamorous than the one they are used to.
This eventually puts old-school craftspeople out of work.

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Finally, tourism numbers may also be affected, as travellers become
disillusioned with finding every place just the same as the one they
visited previously. To see the same products in shops the world over is
boring, and does not impel visitors to open their wallets in the same
way that trinkets or souvenirs unique to the particular area do.

2013年3月22日

Some may argue that all people are entitled to have access to the same
products, but I say that local objects suit local conditions best, and
that faceless uniformity worldwide is an unwelcome and dreary prospect.

Task 2Which one do you prefer: participate in activities alone or
with a team or group?

300 words

2013年8月10日

剑10 Test B

Task 2Some students prefer to study or work on difficult class
assignments early in the morning. Other students prefer to do this type
of work in the evening. Which do you prefer and why?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

2013年3月22日

Write about the following topic:

Task 1

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

Which of the activities do you prefer to do by yourself or with a group
of people: study, exercise, or shopping?

What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a
large number of toys.

2012年4月27日

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.

Task 1What is your strength your country education? Include reasons
and examples to support your response.

Write at least 250 words.

2011年3月4日

范文

Task 2When they are studying to prepare for an exam, some students
like to study with other people, while others like to study alone. Which
do you prefer and why?

It is true that many parents purchase a multitude of playthings for
their offspring. Whether or not this is a good thing for the child, is a
moot point. On the face of it the advantages seem most apparent, but
could there be a downside to this phenomenon of devoted parenting as
well?

2011年4月30日

Most people would consider children who have many toys to be the
fortunate ones. Interesting things to play with stimulate many positives
in the young boy or girl, such as optimum brain development, hand-eye
coordination and colour recognition, apart from the simple joy of
playing. Modern toys are designed to be educational as well as fun, and
concerned parents carefully select products which might speed their
child’s acquisition of numbers or the alphabet.

Task 1Describe something you write that is very important to you. It
could be a letter, a poem, an essay. Explain why you think it is
important to you?

Is it possible that owning multiple toys could be in any way detrimental
to a child? This is an unusual question, but there are some hidden
pitfalls. For one, wealthy parents might spoil their son or daughter by
showering him/her with toys, resulting in a negative effect on the
child’s character. For another, a growing child’s concentration span may
suffer if they are constantly surrounded by too many tempting objects,
so that they become unable to focus on any one game for a decent length
of time before being distracted. On the social side, older children may
become targets of envy from classmates, if they are perceived as having
far more possessions than their peers. Finally, the majority of toys
today are made of plastic which commonly contains the chemical BPA,
proven to be dangerous for infants to suck on or ingest.

2010年11月13日

It is clear then that this situation is not as straightforward as it
first appears. It would seem that one of the many duties of parents is
to make an informed choice about how many toys they buy for their young
ones.

Task 2Do you prefer to study with a group of people or study alone?

310 words

2010年6月12日

Task 2Do you agree that parents should get involved when their
children are choosing their university?

2009年10月17日

Task 2Some students prefer to write an essay. Other students prefer
to take a test. Which type of task do you prefer?

2009年10月10日

Task 2Do you prefer to work at home or at office? Please give
specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

2009年9月19日

Task 2Some people prefer to solve a challenge all by themselves.
Others prefer to depend on other people’s help. Which do you prefer and
why?

2009年8月22日

Task 2Which way do you prefer to spend your spare time: reading,
thinking alone or participating in group activities?

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